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English 11月写的练习一  

2008-11-10 00:34:40|  分类: 英语学习 |  标签: |举报 |字号 订阅

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In my practice, all the friends and recommendations reply is precious. I will record my progress as a ladder. Thank you very much! My friends!

  在我的练习上,朋友们的所有回复和建议都是珍贵的.我将记录下来,作为我进步的阶梯.非常感谢!

 

(11月8日) 你的最近的假期   Your Last Vacation

Describe your last vacation. Where was the last place you vacationed? What activities and sites do you recommend for other vacationers?

描述您上次假期您在那度假。如果是您最后度假的地方?你推荐什么活动和场地给其他游客?

 

In August this year, I used my holidays, by plane to China's Sichuan Province, where I recently spent a holiday. There has experienced a major earthquake in the city - Beichuan.

Where my home away from the 2,000 km, range aircraft needed 2 hours.This year on May 12th, an earthquake destroyed the city, many people were killed. I took some photos, I visited the children still alive.

I just take some medicine and food, but I can not afford to do more. At that time, I am very sad, I have to bring the issue to be recorded in my blog on the Chinese. There, I met some friends to help disaster relief, there are New Zealanders, Americans, Japanese and Canadians. They are all volunteers. They have a great, charitable heart.

 Back to my home, I came to LIVEMOCHA, I began to seriously study English.

我在今年8月份,用我的假期,乘飞机去了中国的四川,在那里度过我最近的一个假期。那里有一个经历了大地震的城市-北川。那里离我家2000公里,飞机航程需要2个小时。在今年5月12日,地震摧毁了整个城市,死了很多人。我拍了一些照片,我访问了还活着的孩子们。我只是带去了一些药品和食物,但我没有能力做得更多。那时候,我很伤心,我曾经把事情记录在我的中文博客上。在那里,我见到一些去帮助救灾的朋友,有新西兰人、美国人、日本人和加拿大人,他们都是自愿者。他们都有一个伟大的、慈善的心。

回到我的家,我来到LIVEMOCHA,我开始认真学习英语。

 

Roy Burton : In August this year, for my holidays, I went by plane to China's Sichuan province, for a holiday.  They had experienced a major earthquake in the city, Bechuan.  It was a two hour flight from my home.  .............................
I took some medicine............
At that time I WAS very sad, I HAD .....
Your English is very good.  The corrections are minor and I understood everything you have written.  Best wishes, Roy

你的英语很好。更正是次要的,我理解你书写的一切。最良好的祝愿,罗伊 

 

Susen : Hello,Roy Burton ,This is my“Last vacation”in September on the practice:

"I flew in August to China's Sichuan, where a major earthquake has experienced the city - Beichuan. Where 2,000 kilometers away from my home, From Guangzhou to Chengdu needed two o'clock,Airline tickets need to 1,500 yuan Ren Min Be. In the May 12th quake destroyed the entire city, killed a lot of people. I made a photo, see the children still alive. I brought a number of medicines and food, but I can not afford to do more. I am very sad, I put things I recorded in the my Chinese blog, I can do by the way, where to write in English. "

It was because of you and friends to help me become better.
Most important of all, because I follow every day of your voice saying, I began to learn to say. In the past, I would say to others: How are you? Thanks!
I thank you!

你好,罗伊伯顿,这是我在9月份做的“最后假期”:

“。。。。。。。”

这是因为你和朋友们的帮助使我成为更好的。最重要的,因为我每天都按照您的声音说,我开始学会讲话。

在过去,我总是告诉别人:“你好吗?”“谢谢!”。我感谢你!

 

Roy Burton : hello susen
You are improving a lot.  Let me correct what you have written.
I flew in August to China's sichuan, where teh city of Beichan had experienced a major earthquake.  Bechuan is 2,000 kilometres from my home.  The flight from Guangzhou to Beichan took two hours and the airline tickets cost 1,500 yuan Ren Min Be.  On May 12th the earthquake destroyed the entire city and killed a lot of people.  I took a photo of some of the children who survived.  I brought a number of medicines and food but I cannot afford to do more.  I am very sad.  I put things I recorded on my Chinese blog, wherer I write in english.

It is because of you and friends that I am becoming better.  Most important of all, because I follow what you are saying every day, I am beginning to speak english better.  In the past I would only say "How are you" and "thanks". 
You are a very kind person and it is a pleasure to help you.  Best wishes, Roy

您正在改善了很多东西。让我纠正你写的。

“。。。。。。”

这是因为你和朋友,我变得更好。最重要的,因为我按照你说的话每一天,我开始讲英语更好。在过去我只会说“你好”和“感谢。”

您是一个非常善良的人,并很高兴为您提供帮助。最良好的祝愿,罗伊

 

Roy Burton : Ihello Susen,I noticed I made a couple of spelling mistakes.  Sorry about that.

                     你好Susen ,我发现我犯了几个拼写错误。我对此深感抱歉。


       susen : Yes? In there? Tell me tomorrow. You do not go to sleep? Now, do you have in place is late at night.   

 是吗?在那里?明天告诉我。你不睡觉吗?现在,你那里是在深夜。

 

Roy Burton : I have played in a jazz band for many years.  I started when I was about 20, so that means I have been playing for about 50 years.  I am playing tonight, Sunday, for a swing dance club.  I play trombone and saxophone.  I will open Livemocha when I come home and see if there is a message from you.  Au revoir , Roy

我已经参加了爵士乐队多年。我开始的时候约20岁 ,所以这意味着我已经玩了大约50年。我今晚星期日,一个回旋舞蹈俱乐部玩。我玩长号和萨克斯管。我将开放Livemocha,当我回家,看看是否有您的讯息。再见,罗伊 

 

susen : Roy, I believe that a long period of time like music, is a life full of love and passion. Your life is full of some the sun.  

 罗伊,我相信,在很长一段时间喜欢音乐,一定是对生活充满爱心和激情。你的生活是一定充满阳光的。

 

Roy Burton : I just arrived home, just after midnight, and received your message.  I know what you are saying and I appreciate it.  I won't correct it because I understand.  Thank you.  Regards, Roy

我在午夜过后刚好回到家,并收到您的讯息。我懂得你说的话并表示赞赏。我将不纠正它,因为我理解了。谢谢您。此致,罗伊

  

Don Moore : In August this year, I used my holidays to go by plane to China's Sichuan Province, where I recently spent a holiday. This summer, the area experienced a major earthquake in the city - Beichuan.  From my home, it takes more than  2 hours to fly here. This year on May 12th, an earthquake destroyed the city, many people were killed. I took some photos, I visited the children still alive. I  took some medicine and food, but I can not afford to do more. At that time, I am very sad, I have to bring the issue to be recorded in my blog in  Chinese. There, I met some friends to help disaster relief, there are New Zealanders, Americans, Japanese and Canadians. They are all volunteers. They have a great, charitable heart. Back home,, I came to LIVEMOCHA, I began to seriously study English.

 

JIM :Susen, your description of your holiday gives a vivid description of the destruction caused by the earthquake and the concern that many peoples, including yourself, have for the plight of the victims of this disaster.
susen,您描述您的假期提供了生动的描述,地震所造成的破坏和,许多国家人民包括你自己,也为这场灾难的受害者困境的关注。
In August this year, I flew to China's Sichuan Province, where I recently spent a holiday. There was a major earthquake in the city of Beichuan. My flight required two hours to travel the 2000 km. from my home. The  earthquake which destroyed the city and took many lives occurred on May 12th. I took some photos. I visited the children still alive. I just took some medicine and food which is all that I could afford. At that time, I was and still am  very sad. I have to record the issue in my blog in Chinese. There, I made some friends that were helping in the disaster relief. There were New Zealanders, Americans, Japanese and Canadians. They are all volunteers. They have a great, charitable heart. Back home, I came to LIVEMOCHA to begin to seriously study English.

 

Terrean : You have received good comments.
Your writing is very good, you just need some practice to fix some small points.
It sounds like your vacation was a life changing event!

您已经收到很好的意见。您的写作是非常好,你只需要一些实践,修正了一些小点。

这听起来像您的假期生活是一个不断变化的事件!

 

susen : Terrean,thank you.
My life is a holiday has not changed. But I have to write their own different requirements.

Terrean ,谢谢你。我的经历事件在一个假期没有改变。但是我必须要求自己在不同的角度写。



       

(11月6日) Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

描述你最后一次去购物。你买了什么?用了多少费用?

Yesterday I went to shopping malls. I use 20 yuan to buy a chicken, 40 yuan to buy one kilogram of beef, 18 yuan to buy a box of milk, 30 yuan to buy a piece of cheese, 15 yuan to buy a loaf of bread, 20 yuan to buy 2 kg of apples, 10 yuan to buy one kilogram of eggs , 50 yuan to buy a bag of dog food, 20 yuan to buy some potatoes, tomatoes, carrots, pepper, mushrooms, beans. There are 50 yuan to buy some flowers and paints.Clerk told me that the money should be paid 273 yuan.In the way home, I have given to my car gasoline . To pay 150 yuan.

Yesterday, I was paid 423 yuan money, I usually shop once a week.

昨天我去商场购物。我用20元买了一只鸡、40元买一公斤牛肉、18元买一盒牛奶、30元买一块奶酪、15元买一条面包、20元买2公斤苹果、10元买一公斤鸡蛋、50元买一袋狗食,用20元买了一些土豆、西红柿、胡萝卜、甜椒、蘑菇、豆角。还有50元买一些鲜花和绘画颜料。店员告诉我,应该付273元钱。我用我的卡付帐。回家的路上,我给我的汽车加油,花了150元。

昨天,我付出是423元钱,通常我每周购物一次。

 

chris :  -Yesterday I went to THE shopping malls.
(If you make a short list of items in English the traditional way is to do it the way you have done, but you have a very long list of things. It would be better to make a column in this case.)
I paid for the following items:
  - 20 yuan for a chicken
  - 40 yuan for one kilogram of beef
  - 18 yuan for a carton of milk
  - 30 yuan for a piece of cheese
  - 15 yuan for a loaf of bread
  - 20 yuan for 2 kg. of apples
  - 10 yuan for one kilogram of eggs
  - 50 yuan for a bag of dog food
  - 20 yuan for vegetables including potatoes, tomatoes, carrots, peppers mushrooms and beans.
-I also spent 50 yuan on some flowers and paints.
-The clerk told me that my total bill was 273 yuan.
-On the way home, I put some gasoline in my car which cost 150 yuan.
-My expenses for the day were 423 yuan in cash. I usually shop once a week. 

,昨天我去商场。 (如果你作一个简短的项目清单,英语的传统方式是这样做的方式,如你有一个很长的名单中的事情,你可这样做。在这种情况下,这将是更好地使用列表。 )

我支付下列项目:

-2 0元一只鸡

- 40元一公斤的牛肉

-1 8元一箱的牛奶

- 30元一块奶酪

-1 5元一条面包

 -2 0元2公斤苹果

-1 0元一公斤鸡蛋

- 50元一包狗食

-2 0元的蔬菜,包括土豆,西红柿,胡萝卜,辣椒蘑菇和豆类。

 ,我还花5 0元买了一些鲜花和颜料。

,店员告诉我,我总要付二百七十三元。

 -在回家的路上,我为我的汽车加一些油,费用150元。 

,我一天的费用为四百二十三元现金。我通常每星期去一次商场。

 

Roy Burton : Very well done.  I USED (past tense) 20 yuan to buy a chicken, ...
There WAS (past tense) to buy some flowers.....
THE clerk told me the total was 273 yuan.
ON the way home I put gasoline in my car, which cost 150 yuan.
Today I was paid 423 yuan.  I usually shop once a week.

 

Don Moore : Yesterday I went to the shopping malls. I use 20 yuan to buy a chicken, 40 yuan to buy one kilogram of beef, 18 yuan to buy a box of milk, 30 yuan to buy a piece of cheese, 15 yuan to buy a loaf of bread, 20 yuan to buy 2 kg of apples, 10 yuan to buy one kilogram of eggs , 50 yuan to buy a bag of dog food, 20 yuan to buy some potatoes, tomatoes, carrots, pepper, mushrooms and beans. Also 50 yuan to buy some flowers and paints. The clerk told me that the total is 273 yuan.On the way home, I also had to buy gasoline,for another  150 yuan. Today, I  paid out 423 yuan. I usually shop once a week.

 

Terrean : Others have left you good comments.
Good job on the writing. Your use of spaces and punctuation is good, just need to fix a few things.

其他人给予你很好的意见。干得好就写。您使用空格和标点符号是好的,只是需要修正一些东西。

 

Jim : Yesterday I went to theshopping mall. I used 20 yuan to buy a chicken, 40 yuan to buy one kilogram of beef, 18 yuan to buy a box of milk, 30 yuan to buy a piece of cheese, 15 yuan to buy a loaf of bread, 20 yuan to buy 2 kg of apples, 10 yuan to buy one kilogram of eggs , 50 yuan to buy a bag of dog food, 20 yuan to buy some potatoes, tomatoes, carrots, pepper, mushrooms and beans. I spent 50 yuan to buy some flowers and paints. Clerk told me that the total bill was 273 yuan. On the way home, I stopped to buy gasoline for the car which cost 150 yuan.  Today, my total expenses was 423 yuan . I usually shop once a week.

 

 

202-9单元3 练习要求: Favorite Restaurant

Describe your favorite restaurant. What type of food is served there? Describe your favorite dish served there.

描述你最喜欢的餐厅。什么类型的食物是什么?描述你最喜欢的菜有送达。

 11月2日

I like the name of a restaurant's cocoa, I like where the vegetables and chicken and beef.Today is Sunday, a friend and I eat there.I asked a T-bone, a vegetable salad, a glass of orange juice,Waiter in after 20 minutes to me.. Food is delicious, I am very happy.

我喜欢一个名字叫可可的餐厅,那里有我喜欢的蔬菜和鸡和牛肉。今天是星期天,我和朋友在那里吃饭。我要了一盘T骨牛排,一份蔬菜沙律,一杯橙汁,侍应生是在20分钟后送给我。食物是美味的,我很愉快。

 

doveign:  I like a (the) restaurant called Cocoa.  They serve (i like where the) vegetables, (and) chicken, and beef.  Today ( is Sunday), a friend and I ate there.  I ordered (asked) a T-bone steak, a (vegetable) salad, and a glass of orange juice.  The waiter (in) came back after 30 minutes (to me)The food was (is) delicious, and I was (am) very happy. 

 

Terrean:  doveign has left you good comments. Keep up the good work!

 

Jim :   Susen, that was good. I added an audio.
I like a restaurant named Cocoa. They serve vegetables, chicken and beef. A friend and I went there on Sunday. I ordered a T-bone steak, a vegetable salad and a glass of orange juice. The waiter returned in 20 minutes with our meals. The food was delicious. I am very happy.

 

Don Moore :I like the name of a restaurant's cocoa, I like where the vegetables and chicken and beef. Today is Sunday, a friend and I eat there. I asked a T-bone, a vegetable salad, a glass of orange juice, Waiter in after 20 minutes to me.. Food is delicious, I am very happy.
I am mixed up on this work.  You seemed to be ready to assign a name to the restaurant but yet you don't.

 我混合了这方面的工作。你似乎是准备指派一个名字的餐厅,但尚未你没有。

 

SUSEN: Don, I understand what you say, thank you. It is wrong to describe why I did not like the restaurant. But now I understand the English words are not enough.

 

  题目:At the café     (08-11-01)

Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?

描写您在一个咖啡馆。什么是你最喜欢饮料?你点一个三明治或糕点?

  

I like to call a Blue Mountain Cafe, I often go there.

There are have very good and very fragrant coffee, have wonderful music and smiling waiters.

Here I usually have a cup of coffee and a pastry, at the same time, the idea of my picture works.

我喜欢一个叫蓝山的咖啡馆,我经常去那里。

这里有很好和很香的咖啡,有美妙的音乐,有微笑的侍应生。

在这里我通常点一杯咖啡和一份糕点,同时构想我的图画作品.

 

DON:  I like to visit the Blue Mountain Cafe, I often go there. There have very good food and very fragrant coffee, have wonderful music and smiling waiters. Here I usually have a cup of coffee and a pastry, at the same time, the idea of my picture works.

我喜欢访问蓝山咖啡,我经常去那里。有非常好的食品和咖啡很香,有美妙的音乐和服务员微笑. 在这里,我通常要一杯咖啡和一个糕点,在同一时间构想我的图片作品。

 

Terrean:  Good job susen!  I have made a few revisions for you.
When describing several attributes to an object you may list them all in one sentence separated by a comma.
Read my revision below and you will get an idea of what I mean.
"I like to visit the Blue Mountain Cafe, I go often (there). There are have very good food, very fragrant coffee, (have)wonderful music and smiling waiters. Here I usually have a cup of coffee and a pastry, at the same time, the idea of my picture works."

干得好susen !我已做了些修改给你。

当描述几个属性,一个对象可以一一列举一句话逗号分隔。看我的修改如下,你将获得我的一个意思想法。

“我喜欢访问蓝山咖啡,我经常去。有很好的食物,很香的咖啡,美妙的音乐和服务员微笑着。在这里,我通常要一杯咖啡和一份糕点,在同一时间思想我的图片作品。”

 

JIM:My favorite cafe is the Blue Mountain Cafe. I often go there. They have very good food and  fragrant coffee. They have wonderful music and smiling waiters. I usually have a cup of coffee and a pastry. The idea of my picture works.

我最喜爱的咖啡是蓝山咖啡。我经常去那里。他们有非常好的食品和芬芳的咖啡。他们美妙的音乐和服务员微笑着。我通常要一杯咖啡和一个糕点。构想我的图片作品。

 

ROY:  I think you have used the correct words so I won't try to alter what you have said but just to slightly correct what you have written. I like to call AT...
The last sentence, regarding your picture works.  I think what you are saying is that you are thinking about a new picture and it is in the tranquility of the cafe that ideas for a new picture will come to you.
If I am correct, I would finish the last part of the last sentence as follows: at the same time, I think about ideas for my next picture.

我想你已使用正确的话,所以我不会试图改变你所说,只是稍微纠正的,你写的书面的:“我喜欢“叫”AT...”

最后一句,关于您的图片作品。我想你想说的话是,你正在考虑一个新的图片,它是宁静的咖啡馆的想法,一个新的图片会来找你。

如果我是正确的,我要完成的最后部分的最后一句话如下:在同一时间,我在思想我的构想,为我以后的图画。

 

SUSEN:  My friends, I understand your words and audio.

             我的朋友们,我理解你们的文字和音频。

I like to visit the Blue Mountain Cafe, I go often. There are have very good food, very fragrant coffee, wonderful music and smiling waiters. Here I usually have a cup of coffee and a pastry, at the same time, I think about ideas for my next picture.

( 08-11-01凌晨3点钟,这是11月的第一个练习。加油!加油!!自我鼓励一把,嘻嘻 )

 

单元9-2 写: 在公园  At the park

Describe what you do at the park. Do you play sports? Do you read?

描述你在该公园。你打球?你读?

 

I like to visit the Waterfront Park, there are have beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment. There can be swimming, sports, games, barbecue and reading.

Sundays, sometimes I and my friends there swimming and games, We will bring some of the barbecue food and drink, To enjoy a happy afternoon. 

我喜欢访问海滨公园,那里有海滩、树林、草坪和健身设备。在那里可以游泳、运动、游戏、烧烤和阅读。

在星期天,我有时会和我的朋友在那里游泳和游戏,我们会准备一些食物烧烤和饮料,享受高兴的一个下午。

 

Roy Burton:  I like to visit the waterfront park, WHERE there are beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment.  There can be swimming, sports, games, barbeques and reading.  Sundays, sometimes MY FRIENDS AND I go swimming and play games.  We(will) bring (some of the) a barbeque (meaning the food that you cook on the barbeque) and some drinks and (to) enjoy a happy afternoon. 

 

Don Moore:  I like to visit the Waterfront Park, there are (have) beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment. There can be swimming, sports, games, barbecue and reading. Sundays, sometimes, me and my friends go swimming and play games, We will bring some (of the) barbecue food and drink, To enjoy a happy afternoon.

 

Dave46:   I like to visit the Waterfront Park, there they (are) have beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment. They have (can be) swimming, sports, games, barbecue and reading. On  Sundays, sometimes  my friends and I go there for swimming and games. We (will) bring some (of the) barbecued food and drinks to enjoy a happy afternoon.
Good !

 

Jim:  I like to visit the Waterfront Park. There are (have) beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment. There can be swimming, sports, games, barbecue and reading. Sometimes, on Sundays, my friends and I go there for swimming and games. We will bring (some of the ) barbecued food and drink (,)  to enjoy a happy afternoon.

 

dung quoc:  I like to visit the Waterfront Park, there are MANY THING TO PLAY SUCH AS:beaches, forests, lawns and sports equipment. There,WE can GO swimming,PLAY sports, games,MAKE barbecue and read BOOKS. Sunday, I and my friends LIKE  swimming and PLAYING games BEST, We will bring some barbecue food and drink To enjoy a happy TRIP(YOU HAVE MANY VOCABULARY.IT'S A ADVANTAGE FOR YOU )

 

 


 

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